This is my blog where I write random things that come to mind, and where I can improve my writing skills. All feedback is welcome positive or negative, just ple
review girl in coffee shop So I'm really new to writing and I'm not very good at it. If you happen to see “the girl in the coffee shop” please give me your opinions! I'd love to hear other peoples feedback on it and what I could work on, just please be nice about it. I want to get into writing but like I said I'm really new and could use some helpful tips on how to improve. Thank you in advance!!
The girl in the coffee shop
I am not the girl in the coffee shop.
The one up early in the morning sipping on her coffee, working on her projects, no I am not her.
I am the girl with countless sleepless nights and sleepy days.
The girl in the coffee shop with her laptop and notes strives towards her goals, and I don’t even know where to begin to achieve mine.
I am the girl who always finds herself too exhausted to do the smallest of tasks.
She enjoys every last sip of her coffee, while I have to quickly drink mine just so I can stay awake in the day if only for an hour longer.
In the coffee shop she plans every word and sentence carefully and I chaotically write out anything that comes to mind.
I want to be the hardworking girl who wakes up as the sunrises to go sip her coffee and work on her projects.
Those projects she writes with ease.
I aspire to be her.
I aspire to be the girl who spends hours writing a novel or working hard for her classes, confident enough to do it in a coffee shop where all can see.
No, I am not the girl in the coffee shop and I’m not sure I ever will be.